Nice break.
You nailed the drums perfectly.
The bassline is sexy as hell, but I want to hear more of it. Give it a few seconds in the spotlight, a little solo without any drums.
It could use some sort of lead on top of the drums and bass to give it a bit of variation. Some nice soft strings would work nicely.
It also seems a bit short for a song, but thats just me.
Well thanks, but like I said, I felt like it was missing something, I just for the life of me couldn't think of anything, but taking all of that into consideration, I may be able to make a better version of the song. Maybe giving the bassline some solo time would help, but I'm sure I can do more, thanks for the advice, it's much appreciated.
Age 28, Male
Student
The Pines.
Valencia, Venezuela
Joined on 11/28/10
Rhythmic Persuasion